Knocked about for a bit
Like a shoe that doesn’t fit,
Its the same old story.
Too stupid to call it quits
With a greed that never did,
Learn to say no to false glory.
Now I’m standing here in the rain
Just trying to explain,
Why I scare you sometimes.
I’m not crazy, baby,
I’m just a little out of my mind.
Never understood what loving meant
Or how lust could be any different,
Until you waltzed in through the door.
This bottle’s been my best friend
For as long as I’ve been on the mend,
Maybe longer but I can’t recall anymore.
Now I’m standing here in the rain
Just trying to explain,
Why I can’t give you them rose red valentines.
I’m not a cynic, baby,
I’m just the weary kind.
That bittersweet first kiss,
That first night of bliss,
I’ve never known any of these.
Too young to put up a fight
Too easy to be pushed aside,
Innocence is a rare commodity.
Now I’m standing here in the rain
Just trying to explain,
Why the little things mean a lot.
You’re not my property, baby,
You’re just my only shot.
Still too stupid to call it quits
That’s all there is to it,
I’m running out of time.
Washed up and wasted
But still trying to make it,
A stranger to the rose red valentines.
Now I’m standing here in the rain
And I’m young on the face,
But dying in the mind.
I’m not heartless, baby,
I’m just the weary kind.
Super Loved it! Book Marking it! <3
wonderful!!!
Excellent piece… keep it up
This is so great, Paloma! It feels like a song, and I’ve been humming a blues melody ever since reading it. You’re a treasure.
Thank you! You’re very kind.
You’re right. It was supposed to be a song. But since I don’t really play any instruments, I dropped the idea.
That’s how I started with all my songs, and currently it’s like that again. But they stay songs or seeds of songs in my head. Have to return to music soon.
I hope you do that soon. I am eager to hear.
so much angst!!! so young too ……………. beautifully written!
Loved it…:) So it’s about the honest love that you are explaining here & wish every lover thinks of it in this way…:)
wow!!
Hey, can you lend me some of your writing skills… ? My writing sucks !
You rock! I seriously think you should get in touch with someone who is musically inclined and turn this into a song too! And I know you’ve got some serious pipes…I heard you singing the Adele song, remember?
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